Midterm paper help?

[amalthia]

Would anyone be willing to read through my midterm paper for past/present tense problems? It's due today at 11:55pm Central time...and I only have 3 more sections to write before I'm done. Basically, I'd really like another pair of eyes to read over this paper is worth 25% of my overall grade.

email me at amalthia at gmail.com if you have the time.

I'd appreciate any and all help,
Thanks!